Blog #7: Commercial Paper Planning

Hello, Abstract Idea: Determination Links: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kE1H31FmHV4&list=UUKbGPPMiB37HbLIAKyV9bmQ&index=3 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hoyEBma3sy4 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cE3_s9Br1ms http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fRw-I6HwAhw http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2JnYcuRW_qo http://bangbodies.com/2012/08/new-sidney-crosby-commercial-determination/ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hy9U6HMcFG8&list=PL2417AEB120D6CAD0 These are all commercials that I will use in my Determniation abstract idea commercial paper. Thanks for reading, Christian Amering

Blog #5

Hello,
Today I plan on finishing up the last couple of sentences of my paper. I only need two-three more concluding statements to finish my cookie paper.

Grade: 30/30

Thanks for reading,

Christian

Post # 6: Techniques Used in “Red, White, and Beer.

Hi everyone, Today we read an article called, "Red, White, and Beer". The writing techniques that I found in this paper are: 1.) Descriptive writing to describe the 'burly beer drinking men' 2.) Comparitive writing to help reader relate to beer in general 3.) Flashback 4.) Sarcasm 5.) Exageration, describing beer, and beer drinkers 6.) Examples are given of how people who drink beer are perceived We finished by answering the circled questions in our notebook. Thanks for reading, Christian Amering

Food Paper—My writing goals for today

Hi Everyone,

In the next thirty minutes of class, I plan to finish up my paper on cookies. I have allready written the descriptions of taste, smell, and appeal of the 4 different kinds of cookies, and how they all compare. Today I will conclude on what were the better cookies, using specific details.

Grade: 30/30= 100%
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